| 2019-04-08 01:44:33 |
Queen Yavara: Chapter 1
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Wow. Really wonderful start. As always, you paint the scenes beautifully and hint at more complex world-building that I just can’t wait to explore. Yavara is an interesting and entertaining character whose descent into debauchery will certainly be a wild ride for everyone; you’ve put a lot of time into writing her - I can tell. By far the best part of this story - even better than the unmatched eroticism of the sex scenes - is the language. You’re a sexual thesaurus, White Walls. I’ve always taken a healthy amount of pride in my ability to turn a phrase, but it’s such a pleasure to read your stories and see a real master in action. You wield language expertly, and it elevates your writing that much more. Can’t wait to read more. |
| 2019-05-14 18:56:38 |
Agent of Lilith: Chapter 13
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The climactic final chapter will be posted soon - and it’s a long one! |
| 2019-08-09 23:43:29 |
The Pit_(0)
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Dark, wonderfully dark. Your writing is beautiful; I enjoyed this story immensely. I’m eager to see more from you. |
| 2019-08-09 23:43:47 |
The Pit_(0)
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Dark, wonderfully dark. Your writing is beautiful; I enjoyed this story immensely. I’m eager to see more from you. |