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Comments from Enticing_Vixen
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-01-11 01:21:10 | Daddy's Girl_(0) | Anonymous reader 2011-06-29 04:06:49... claims that there was no clear estimation of the girl's age. However, it is clearly stated in the very first paragraph that she had just turned 16. "BadBill 2010-07-03 14:07:10 He should force the younger ones to suck him off next, then have an incest orgy" There was no mention at all about any other children in the house. Remember people, if you are going to comment on a story then you should at least try to get your facts straight. With all that aside, I personally enjoyed this particular story. Yet, I do agree with a few of the the other readers that a bit more background would go a long way. Also, there were a small number of grammatical mistakes. Granted they were generally easy to overlook, but the flow would have been better without them. Keep writing, because you are very talented for the short stories. |
| 2012-01-11 01:23:10 | Daddy's Girl_(0) | Anonymous reader 2011-06-29 04:06:49... claims that there was no clear estimation of the girl's age. However, it is clearly stated in the very first paragraph that she had just turned 16. "BadBill 2010-07-03 14:07:10 He should force the younger ones to suck him off next, then have an incest orgy" There was no mention at all about any other children in the house. Remember people, if you are going to comment on a story then you should at least try to get your facts straight. With all that aside, I personally enjoyed this particular story. Yet, I do agree with a few of the the other readers that a bit more background would go a long way. Also, there were a small number of grammatical mistakes. Granted they were generally easy to overlook, but the flow would have been better without them. Keep writing, because you are very talented for the short stories. |