| 2019-08-22 01:16:32 |
Earning an Allowance
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Good start I agree with throather |
| 2019-08-22 01:16:41 |
Earning an Allowance
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Good start I agree with throather |
| 2019-08-22 01:32:05 |
Black Bimbo
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Nicely done, wife just be a dike. Good story |
| 2019-08-24 22:05:26 |
the bosses daughter_(2)
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I gave you a positive, cause I liked the story an you had a good life. But yes grammar needs work. I suggest you get a spell and grammar check I use one for my own story. |
| 2019-08-28 01:37:34 |
The aliens who forced us to evolve Part 1
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Good story, nice start, need to get a word check app. You had misspelled words that took away from story. Also make it longer. Good job. |