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Comments from Lunalupo
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-04-22 21:46:28 | A Sleepover With Aunt Stephanie | This is a truly wonderful story. The background and character development were perfect and the blow by blow description of everything leading up to the actual fucking was the personification of a great story of eroticia. Thank you so much for writing and sharing your talent with us. I just hope that these two characters continue in your future stories. Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-24 21:07:45 | Started to read it then noticed the extremely long first paragraph. That is a sure sign of someone who does not write well. Sorry, I could not read itl. | |
| 2010-04-24 22:27:53 | Fringe Benefits | Great story. Well written with great descriptions of what is happening. The only thing I would change, and this is entirely a personal preference, is that when Dan is fucking that he shoot his hot load of cum deep into the girl's/woman's pussy instead of pulling out to cum in their mouths. I love great blowjobs and love to have the gal suck my cum down her throat, but the pussy is number one. Great job, thanks for sharing and of course a positive for your story. Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-28 23:57:42 | Getting Cindy Fucked | Loved the story. Reminded me of the times my ex and I used to have. We had many 3, 4, and moresomes. She was an exotic dancer with an absolutely beautiful body and face before we were married and she loved to show off her dancer's body as well as fuck. We had many, many awesome times fucking her beautiful body. Thanks for writing and sharing your experiences. Hopefully you will share more with us. Lunalupo |
| 2010-04-29 23:48:28 | Long Lost Lovers... | This could be a good story if you rewrite it and make it like it was happening now, with quotation marks, actual conversation, etc. As it is it is hard to read and enjoy. |