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Comments from TheDevilsOwn
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2021-07-13 21:56:23 | Lucky 9 | Some sentence structure and grammar would be great. While it's an okay story, it would be great if it was written like a true story, using proper punctuation, sentence structure and paragraphs. There is a lot of software you can get for free that will help you write better and not make it so painful to read. |
| 2019-03-01 04:07:47 | My Sister and Her Friends (Part 2) | Joe, you are a fantastic writer and I hope to see you post some more stories soon. |
| 2019-03-03 18:37:37 | Mr. Green | Amazingly well crafted story! I seriously hope there is a second and third and many other parts going to this story. |
| 2019-03-18 23:25:12 | The Vampire Kiss Chapter Eight: Unholy Hungers | Sooooo...uh, question? Where is part Seven of this story? It jumps from Six to Eight. |
| 2019-03-24 13:13:46 | My Best Friends Father | I don't think much of people that criticize the work of others under an "Anonymous" tag. For gods sake, if you're going to be a douche, at least have the balls to create a profile so the writer can at least email you and ask you for a more detailed critique. That being said, well done Mystic! I love your stories and have read them all! "Anonymous reader Report 2016-10-11 00:48:32 The story may be good but the writing is between mediocre and bad." |