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Comments from ArtCy
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-29 01:35:59 | G-Spot . . . or Not | I like that you develop the characters and make the reader care about them, rather than having them just begin fucking right off. It was delightful torture, waiting for Vinny and Gina to finally get it on, and then you slid in Shelly, who turned out to be an integral part of the story, as well as Gina's study! What else was a pleasant surprise was not finding a ton of typos (although it seems the norm), which tends to drive me nutz!! |
| 2019-08-10 22:32:21 | Golden Girls | Tina, I'm becoming more hooked on your writing!! I feel like I'm getting to know you through the details of your characters! |
| 2019-08-10 23:25:18 | A Second Life | One reason I liked this was because at times it was difficult to tell if it was the writer's or the character's POV! |
| 2019-08-13 01:11:09 | An Obsession--or Two...Part 3 | FINALLY the pussy!!! Greg has no idea what he has to look forward to!! |
| 2019-09-04 22:46:25 | Teasing Dad with my Friends, part II | I've read all your stories, because they're well written, and.....hot!!! If you are nearly as hot in real life, I wish to hell I was your dad!!! |