| 2020-09-16 05:45:05 |
The Caretaker
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I'm sorry, but there are far too many sexual predators taking advantage of institutionalised women for me to like this tale, fictional though it is. One of my ex girlfriends was taken advantage of when she was in psychiatric hospital and she left it worse off than when she went in. |
| 2020-09-20 14:19:11 |
Kate's Last Day
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While death is not at all erotic, and I hated this story, I would like to read a Kate Goes To Hell. It would be even better if it's a non erotic, extreme fantasy story. |
| 2020-10-02 17:04:49 |
A Boy and His Mother 1
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What a charming family. |
| 2020-11-21 15:31:00 |
Girlfriend's little sister
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You know, I realise this is fiction, but there is something called the necessity of the reader being able to suspend disbelief, and good story fails completely in that regard. |
| 2020-12-08 16:11:08 |
Quarantined with Mom and My Sisters Chapter 1: My Loving Mother's Naughty Relief
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Excellent story. The sequels, not so much. I agree with "Storysmith" above who thinks you increased the ages of your characters to be at least 18. They act like mid-teens at most. |