| 2019-10-24 21:46:17 |
Sister’s helping hand (pt-I)
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Good story, but PLEASE have someone proofread for you. |
| 2019-11-07 16:12:54 |
My initiation.
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I gave you a positive vote, but only because I think English is not your first language. If it is, you need some lessons. |
| 2019-12-12 17:55:11 |
"Magic Words"
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Well, I can tell you're not ACTUALLY a writer. So many mistakes, man. You really should pass this to your sister before uploading it. Maybe she can help you with it. |
| 2020-05-26 16:25:31 |
Curious Siblings (Part 1)
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This story is fantastic! Can't wait for part 3! |