| 2020-09-14 17:18:24 |
My older sister fucked me
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No paragraphs. Direct quotations not punctuated . Too many misspelled.words. |
| 2020-09-15 13:01:17 |
The sophomore and me, an older guy (CHapter 1)
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Principal---not "principle". Remember the school principal is your PAL. |
| 2020-09-21 14:07:34 |
The sophomore and me, an older guy (CHapter 1)
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Still not created in the summary, Still "principles" |
| 2020-09-21 14:07:40 |
The sophomore and me, an older guy (CHapter 1)
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Still not created in the summary, Still "principles" |
| 2020-09-21 14:16:23 |
Cousin love
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Lacks plausibility. esp at the end when she says "no going back after this" when they've already done it. If she's such a party animal, why so long before they hooked up? |