| 2019-07-20 16:38:51 |
What a Difference a Summer Makes- Part 4a
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I'm gonna try to be honest but nice here. The 1st chapter was the best one. From there, everything just went downhill. Your characters are just too perfect. The story has no drama anymore. It's already reached its peak. I feel like you rushed Kimme, Joe, and Chad's reconciliation. I expected something like a hate fuck or etc. But after Chad barely getting home, their back to being best friends. Frankly, the story is already dead just as fast as it was alive. It's been a good run, throatHER. |