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Comments from Soggy Biscuit
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-28 16:49:27 | Sealed Fate | Well said. But I can't help reading something that has necrophilia as a tag and says quote-unquote "Based on real events". I'm really starting to question the lives of some writers on this site other than writing stories about people who take pleasure in having sexual intercourse with a CORPSE. But let me just keep quiet and let you live your perverted fantasies. |
| 2019-07-28 17:03:01 | The Chauffeur (#58) The Fire | Paging Pablo Diablo. I had to jump all the way from chapter fifteen to chapter fifty-eight in order to comment on "The Chauffeur" series. I'm gonna try to be honest mate. Please remember this is just an opinion and doesn't apply to all the Pablo Diablo crazy fans out there. If you've noticed, interest in "The Chauffer" series has declined according to the view counts from the first installment in the series, and to this one, the most recent installment. You might say it's because most people read only the first stories under the "Top Rated Sex Stories - Last 30 Days" list. Well, most of the time, the stories on top of the list are good. They were days when your story ruled the list. Nowadays, your stories barely make the list, much less rule the list. Why? Because in the early days, your stories were "sign in to vote" stories. But that's just part of the tip of the iceberg. [Continued in above comment.] |
| 2019-07-28 17:12:48 | The Chauffeur (#58) The Fire | The real reason your stories aren't as popular as before is that quite frankly, they are boring. Chapter 1 through ten were the pride of the series. From there, It went downhill. I literally forced myself to read all the way to chapter fifteen before I gave up. My reason? The story was as interesting as toenail fungus. You got rid of most of the main characters of the first ten installments, like Sasha too quickly. Plus, now your story has way too many characters who play no significant role in the story except being David's personal fuck toys. Plus, now the stories plot is dead and it's nothing more than a sex scene after another with a little boring shit in between. BORING. Not to mention the sex scenes are WAY over the top. Pablo, I find it interesting that you write so much and make little sense. I mean why the fuck is Dakota still pregnant in the 58th installment? You might as well as add diary to the list of tags. [Continued in above comment] |
| 2019-07-28 17:16:42 | The Chauffeur (#58) The Fire | Frankly Pablo, at one point I looked up to you. If your reading this, I'm just gonna tell it straight to your face [you know what I mean]. You are a VERY talented writer. But "The Chauffer" series died a long time ago. Good luck on your future installments of "The Chauffer" series. It was a good run, but I'm afraid it's over. Goodbye forever, Chauffer..... |
| 2019-08-01 15:30:07 | Routines With My Daughter | How old is this daughter of yours pedophile? |