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Comments from immavoyeur
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-14 17:01:38 | Stop It! - Part 1 | oh this is good, and going to get even better isn't it....keep them coming please :) |
| 2020-01-14 19:14:27 | A Brother's Revenge_(1) | we need more of this please! |
| 2020-01-14 21:12:33 | Weakling_(1) | great story! I sure hope there's more of this coming |
| 2020-01-17 17:41:11 | The Hitchhiker Chapter 2 - A Tuesday To Remember | looking forward to reading this whole series! |
| 2020-09-18 14:21:01 | he was my own son | ok I've tried to read your stories, but just can't. you typically don't get good ratings, and I hope to help you figure that out. You have some GREAT story lines, there's no doubt about that at all. HOWEVER, dude, use some basic writing skills like punctuation and paragraphs! if this isn't something you know how to do, find someone who will proofread for you and fix the glaring issues. Like quotation marks around someone talking. I do know that sometimes uploading something here screws up the formatting, but these big long solid block of text with little punctuation are just way too hard to read |