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Comments from Confusion816
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-05-06 23:22:24 | Raven Ch. 1 - Self Exploration | Thank you for the feedback, Johnny Lightnin. I've noticed myself about the lengthy paragraphs but I just can't help it because I can never decide when to end it. Trust me, this version has the edited paragraphs. Thanks for the comment (which I wish I saw more of) and be on the lookout for the second chapter. |