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Comments from 4qthhh
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-12-02 21:15:47 | My American Virgin part 3 | A great read with a good story line. I can't believe you would leave us hanging. Keep writing! |
| 2015-02-11 17:59:46 | Cherry(chapter 1) | Well done. Great story. I don't see any thing wrong with your writing technique.There are some real brainless idiots out there that trash everybody's work. Keep up the good work and I am on my way to read the next chapter, |
| 2015-02-12 06:32:14 | Cherry (chapter 2) | It's a great read. Just keep going. Great story. Did you have the plot and story line already in your mind, or do you basically write as you type? Makes no difference to me, just curious. I have never tried writing a story such as yours. Not sure I could, but I love your work. All this bulls**t about paragraphs is just that. If someone has done a significant amount of reading then they ought to be able to trace one line of type to the next. It's a pretty basic reading technique. If that is all they have to complain about, then they must like your story as they seem to keep reading it. Maybe it's like sex. You get better at it after some practice. keep it up. |