| 2020-05-30 00:22:19 |
Being More Social - Chapters 16-20
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I just had to create an account to comment.. This is by far the best story I have read on this site, you did a really good job with the plot , cast and everything. In my opinion, your story is worth of being made into a movie or TV show. Well done!! |
| 2020-05-30 00:25:40 |
The Harem Pt.1_(0)
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Terrible, terrible, terrible!! This story is so unrealistically terrible. The troubling thing is the people who actually gave positive rating. |
| 2020-06-05 01:09:27 |
Cherry (chapter 8)
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Very nice story....loved the ending, it was perfect. Although an epilogue of the kids growing up and finding out that David was their biological father would be nice. |
| 2020-06-08 16:26:43 |
One Who Understands
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This was too fucking long, we all knew it was grace he was in love with, why go through so many of those cougars. I lost interest around chapter 20, but kept going till 26, but alas I gave up. This was too fucking long, and you beat about the bush for too damn long......god damn. |
| 2020-07-01 21:37:58 |
DRIVING MISS DAISY--Part 4 of 5
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Nice story, although John seems to say a lot of things that needn't be said. Also you seem to be under the impression that people with photographic memories can't forget to do things like make a phone call. Well they can, it doesn't work that way. If they read something, they won't forget it. But they can forget to do something they were supposed to do. |