| 2020-07-25 06:00:42 |
Across Eternity: Book 1 - Chapter 9
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As with all the stories in this series, you've outdone yourself. THIS is the type of story I love to find here. After years of reading the stories looking for good ones, I have to say this is my number one. I actually log on just to see if you've added another chapter. A few stories have been great, yours is epic. |
| 2020-07-25 06:01:14 |
Across Eternity: Book 1 - Chapter 9
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As with all the stories in this series, you've outdone yourself. THIS is the type of story I love to find here. After years of reading the stories looking for good ones, I have to say this is my number one. I actually log on just to see if you've added another chapter. A few stories have been great, yours is epic. |
| 2020-09-06 07:05:45 |
Tom's parallel world
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Very well written, only a few mistakes but still way better than so many on here. I agree with the other reader, too much padding is boring but you did perfectly. It felt like I was there, from feeling his pain with his break-up, to the beauty of the landscape. The de***********ion of the cat lady with her amazing scent was intoxicating. My only observation is the slight over use of the word "promising" in the beginning. Otherwise fantastic. Can't wait for more. |