| 2021-10-20 22:46:26 |
Pleasure Island: The Bikini Chapter 1
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Interesting concept that I don't think I have seen on here before, so that gets high marks. Well written without any clutter, so again high marks, and lastly, it pulls you in, now I want to know what happen and to him (her). I know we men all say if I was a woman, I'd be the biggest slut in the world, but would we really???_ |
| 2021-10-20 22:58:16 |
Pleasure Island: The Bikini Chapter 2
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Ok, nice follow up, liked that his girlfriend knew who he was now and wanted to do another woman. My only advice is there are a few spelling errors or rather the word is spelled correctly but it's not the word you meant it to be (e.g. "off" instead of "of". not a big deal and lord knows we have all made those mistakes but we try not to. But I like the story line, it's different and that is good! |
| 2021-10-20 23:08:59 |
Pleasure Island: The Bikini Chapter 3
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Another great chapter! I know my wife is going to want to read this story! |
| 2021-10-20 23:14:20 |
Pleasure Island: The Bikini Chapter 4
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I liked this chapter as well, and believe me, you are getting screwed with these low numerical ratings. |
| 2021-10-21 23:57:03 |
Pleasure Island: The Bikini Chapter 2 Alternate Story
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Very interesting. I have to admit, I almost tuned out because i am not much into rape but what a twist! |