| 2022-01-10 19:39:03 |
Stuck Mom chapter 3
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Love the story but you need to proof read for errors, and maybe run it though a word processor to highlight the errors. Keep on writing :) |
| 2023-02-28 17:41:07 |
Body of a Man, Mind of Machine - The Series
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Good story, but mixing of tenses made it a confusing read in many places. I am going to assume English is not your first language, or like me you have a learning disability that must constantly be battled when writing. |
| 2023-03-18 04:53:16 |
Caleb 29 - Consultancy
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Very nice series. Very few errors that makes it a pleasure to read. Please tell me this is not the last chapter.. There is so much more to the story to be told. |
| 2023-04-05 03:07:59 |
Sarah's Submission: Ch 28 - The Conclusion
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Very well written and enjoyed. I do hope you write a follow up just as long about Sarah and Tony and their adventure. Would be hot if he is the bull dom and Sarah as his wife and sex slave is instructed to be dominatrix |