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Date Story title Comment
2009-03-22 13:12:16 Good exciting story, but you must feel such a bastard. On the other hand, maybe girls should learn about sex from their daddies, and boys should learn from their mothers. It is certainly a turn-on to think about.
Oh, and check your spelling, either that or dial back your excitement level when writing.
2009-03-25 12:27:35 The Stronger Bond I didn't read or vote on this story because you do not know the use of the English language. : A. the wrong to, it should have been too, meaning also. : B, There are four different forms of "there" : a.. posessive, 'their' : b. "they're" ,meaning 'they' are doing something, c. 'their',meaning 'they' own something, and, d. There' , a place.

Take an English class, learn the proper use of English words and rewrite your story, I'm sure it will be mucy more interesting.
2009-05-26 12:18:52 My Neighor's Incest IV You might be able to turn this into an incest story if you let him tell Susan, about this adventure. I am waiting for the next chapter.
2009-05-31 14:21:27 Mum! Mum???? Got a good wank out of that one. Yuv gotta 10
2010-04-01 18:17:02 A Boy No Longer If dad doesn't know they are fucking, he'll never figure it out after that one.
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