| 2022-03-08 09:35:56 |
Christmas Wish for Sister
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Very sensitively written love story. |
| 2022-03-17 09:56:34 |
Sugar Momma
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So interesting the way the story builds. It was a surprise to find the trans issue. If I were to be super critical, it seems you hurried to complete the story. After a well thought out development of feelings and thoughts, the sex was too conventionally reported. Such a new experience deserved a deeper exploration of the mental aspect. |
| 2022-04-19 06:19:52 |
My Older Neighbor Part 2
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I enjoyed that very much. It is a personal fantasy, the loving seduction of an older woman. |
| 2022-06-15 06:11:39 |
Summer Job with Benefits
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It was ok. I could read it well enough, despite the others moaning about the English quality. Even the "Anon" comment about your "writting"! |
| 2022-06-15 07:38:11 |
Summer Work with Benefits Part 3
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The story is developing nicely |