| 2022-11-27 01:28:01 |
Timestop: The Class Test
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So naughty. This scenario makes for amazing role play! |
| 2022-11-28 17:27:13 |
Taken by the dogs in the woods, pt. 1
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Really nice character build up. Looks like you didn't continue. I'd like to continue the story. How dark do people want this to go? |
| 2022-12-09 02:33:22 |
How I Met Max and Helen
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Very well written and personal sounding story. |
| 2022-12-09 02:58:09 |
Daddy's Girls Do the Beach
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Real nice, fun. Except I never had a solid feel for what ages everyone was, not that that is necessary. But I pictured the guy younger, like college age, and the girls college age, too. Also, just a general, attractive physical vision of everyone. Could be a little more character development, imo. But, still, fun story. |
| 2022-12-09 02:59:28 |
Daddy's Girls Do the Beach
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Real nice, fun. Except I never had a solid feel for what ages everyone was, not that that is necessary. But I pictured the guy younger, like college age, and the girls college age, too. Also, just a general, attractive physical vision of everyone. Could be a little more character development, imo. But, still, fun story. |