| 2025-11-02 11:32:26 |
Ride to school
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You really got a lot into such a short story! Well done. |
| 2025-12-05 18:03:01 |
Jessica Doggysitter (3)
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Hmm.. yes. Interessting continuation barbiespony. We'll see... I was thinking she'd get a dog of her own maybe. |
| 2025-12-05 22:58:01 |
Hypnotizing Daddy Goes Awry
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Fun twiat. I was sure that it would be the other way around on who was hypnotizing whom! |
| 2026-01-18 05:09:08 |
Missy: Day Two
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Good build up! |
| 2026-01-18 05:21:38 |
Missy: Day Three
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You write well. Good describing skills and I like those humorous inserts about school subjets and stuuf. Makes the reading more fun! |