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Comments from Drakon66
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-20 13:53:06 | MY DOGS I - A Night at the Kennels - Chapters 1-5 | This was a decent story but you need to do some research on canine anatomy and proportions. Some of the details of whats happening are also a bit impossible. If the womans head is between 2 bars, how is the dog that's mounted her going to get his mouth around her neck? I'm giving you a positive rating but you need to think through some of what you're trying to describe. |
| 2025-04-17 13:00:04 | Jessica Doggysitter (part 1) | Good story. I like the build up and your writing style. The only real criticism is you don't need to put a dash "-" in front of what the character is saying. I know, it's a minor thing but it's distracting. I look forward to your next installment of this story. |