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Comments from T140
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2024-05-11 17:55:34 | Cutie in the Lamp Part 2 | Having read both parts posted so far this should turn into a very interesting saga. Keep up the good work! |
| 2024-05-21 21:40:41 | Cutie in the Lamp Part 2 | I quite agree with you. If a story has a developing narrative that brings the characters into the perspective then it is far e the story more interesting to read. A good example of this is the 'Hobo' series where the unfolding of the main characters life with all of its ups and downs made it facinating reading for me. I am trying to expand my story 'Elise' in th same vein even though it is partially ficticious but based on a factual core. Waiting patiently for your part 3 and what adventures your characters get up to! |
| 2024-08-15 02:28:52 | Im not Wearing a Bra or Panties | You could have ecpanded the physical action between your characters to make this story more detailed and then get more reads. The initial de***********ion held more than the sexual encounter. Promising start tjough. |
| 2024-08-15 02:30:22 | Im not Wearing a Bra or Panties | You could have expanded the physical action between your characters to make this story more detailed and then get more reads. The initial desc-ription held more than the sexual encounter. Promising start though. |
| 2024-08-15 02:32:36 | Im not Wearing a Bra or Panties | Damned phone keypads! At least I have found a way around the scr-ipt (***********) starring! |