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Comments from T140
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-03 01:56:46 | HOBO 19 & 20 ( The End) | I appreciate the quality and depth to this story. Your des criptive narrative gave life to the characters throughout. The death of Michelle was a shock as much as anything. May your ink never run dry. |
| 2024-11-03 11:38:46 | How I become daddy's lover… | A nice change in perspective in your story, makes for good reading. As BigDaddyDG says, a little more work on the grammar and structure of your sentences and you will be a winner. Internalising the narrative is a good way to illuminate the main character. |
| 2025-03-29 22:34:59 | Elise Ch.17 | My thanks for the kind comments and my apologies for the gap in continuation of this story. Unfortunately illness played a part and other matters took precedence but I am now in a position to continue the saga and I hope that it meets expectations. Elise Ch.18 is in- progress. |
| 2025-04-03 03:04:30 | Ramblings of an Old Man - Part 11 TFMD | Following up on your comments in regards to my effort 'Elise' I have read your full story to date and found it to be a riveting read. Being from the same era as yourself I can relate to the background parts of it. Extremely well written and des-criptive of the times. Looking forwards to further revelations. PS Elise Ch.18 is in edit mode just now and should be available shortly. |
| 2025-04-03 03:04:57 | Ramblings of an Old Man - Part 11 TFMD | Following up on your comments in regards to my effort 'Elise' I have read your full story to date and found it to be a riveting read. Being from the same era as yourself I can relate to the background parts of it. Extremely well written and des-criptive of the times. Looking forwards to further revelations. PS Elise Ch.18 is in edit mode just now and should be available shortly. |