| 2008-10-17 22:59:52 |
Wild weekend
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It was pretty good until the paragraph where you decided not to take a breath. |
| 2008-10-23 20:36:24 |
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nicely told, well developed story. Congratulations. |
| 2008-10-28 17:31:29 |
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You get an A+ from me and I won't even make you sit in my lap. |
| 2008-11-02 10:39:05 |
My Wife's Christmas Affair
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Very nicely written. It adds so much to the sex scene to have it told from the viewpoint of the cheating wife to her cuckold hubby. Well done. |
| 2008-11-02 10:53:36 |
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A wonderful tutorial--not only for Miss Denise, but also for me, Cha Cha, one of the many writers on this site who look to you, Phrenetic Ice, as our mentor in erotica. |