| 2015-01-19 15:05:32 |
Bethany's Father
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tentacles could've been subject of auto correct? Why are picture links put into your text? Did you do that? This site is rife with viruses. |
| 2015-02-17 20:19:55 |
Roofie Nights
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Incorporating Elisabeth Kübler-Ross' five stages of grief was a genius leitmotif. |
| 2015-02-17 19:43:25 |
The Wedding Gift_(0)
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I had expected Julie's wet frothy pussy in the small room after the wedding was a fucking from her father before the wedding, or some other guy. |
| 2015-02-17 19:24:08 |
Sharing a shower with Mom
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Some good writing, along with a great story idea. |
| 2015-12-10 04:08:52 |
Pretty Panties_(1)
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I didn't catch the reference to a 10" dick. I would've liked reading the daughter's thoughts, too. It's hard to write long detailed sex passages. Kudos. |