| 2009-04-15 13:05:48 |
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Not bad! Loved the twist at the end. |
| 2009-04-20 03:25:07 |
The Man in the Gray Suit - The Watch
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My bad; I thought I had tagged this correctly. My apologies to anyone who was offended. |
| 2009-05-26 10:23:37 |
I Love My Little Sister!-Part One
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Very nice. The back-and-forth perspectives was a nice touch, a very effective device for getting into the heads of both characters. Well done. |
| 2009-07-27 01:20:02 |
The Armoire
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Wow. Seriously - that was incredible. Very good story, character progression, coherent writing; well done, sir! |
| 2009-07-27 01:31:12 |
Abby and her Daughters pt 1
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Very nice. |