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Comments from ppparks
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-10-30 20:06:14 | nightmare_(1) | Great story! There are some gramattical errors that make some of the sentences confusing, but other than that it was awesome. |
| 2013-01-30 21:35:43 | When my dreams came true. | This was a promising story concept that failed to translate for me. I liked the premise and the similarity to The Ten of Them, but the repetitive nature of the information and unbeleiveability of the characters was disappointing. Normally I am a huge fan of your work, this one just didn't work for me. Thanks for the story though. |