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Comments from conrad1235813
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-10-31 11:26:44 | Gymnasium Nightmare | Repost it with paragraphs and I might read it. |
| 2011-03-30 07:39:59 | Harry's Ladies | Check your spelling and grammar! Always check your SPELLING and GRAMMAR! I copied your story to word, and i got this error message: "There are too many spelling or grammatical errors in Document1 to continue displaying them." Mate! Come on. This is just too much. If you can’t be bothered to spell check yourself (or you can’t), then have someone proofread it for you. I’m sure there are plenty of people who would do it for free. Hell, if you can’t find anyone, I’ll do it myself. One of the Anons said "grammar can kill a story". If that’s true, yours is dead, mate. Dead and buried. 10 feet under. I enjoyed it ;) Keep it up. |
| 2011-05-13 13:59:18 | a life of service | One of my favorite stories!! Absolutely brilliant! Well done, mate. |
| 2011-10-26 20:37:18 | The Trick | I just spent about 10 sec trying to work out what a "dident" is... And that's the first paragraph... I'm not going to read it, instead I'm giving you a negative rating for annoying me and posting this load of shite. Proofread it, correct all the spelling mistakes, re-post it. |
| 2011-10-26 20:38:03 | The Trick | I just spent about 10 sec trying to work out what a "dident" is... And that's the first paragraph... I'm not going to read it, instead I'm giving you a negative rating for annoying me and posting this load of shite. Proofread it, correct all the spelling mistakes, re-post it. |