| 2017-11-19 23:25:48 |
Coquette and her cuckold (Part 4)
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I loved your story up until the ending, which ruined it for me. My favorite line was when the wife said, “There’s no way I can stop at tonight, I’m going to continue fucking him for as long as I possibly can. You can complain if you want, or watch if you want, it makes no difference. All I care about is feeling his huge prick ramming into my juicy cunt.” That's the perfect cuckold wife attitude and I thought the husband would have the honor of preparing wife and lover for the climactic surrendering of her anal virginity, but, alas, you turned it into something else entirely. My disappointment cancels out an otherwise positive vote; not a negative, just an abstention with this comment. |
| 2011-08-16 22:56:01 |
Owning a Dominant Bitch - Complete
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Great story. Nice to see plot, character development, all the elements of a well-told story, and erotic to boot. Congratulations. |
| 2011-08-21 15:37:01 |
My wife Maryanne
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I'm a big fan and admirer of bushpilot123, and, frankly envious of your very high percentage ratings. We are about the same age and our lives/marriages have been remarkably similar. You have presented your life experiences as true story accounts, where I have presented mine on this site (in the cuckold category) as fiction, but I got discouraged by the low ratings and nasty comments, so stopped writing, but I thank bushpilot123 and it is encouraging that you have not been vilified by readers for writing honestly about your life. With admiration, Willing Wimp |
| 2011-08-21 16:21:55 |
Linda_(0)
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This story really isn't about the cuckold experience. She is married, yes, and cheating on her husband, but this story has nothing to do with the cuckold, but with the far-less interesting dolt who represents the other man. Only unless the married man gets his face rubbed in it and has to deal with the mixed emotions of that would this story come close to belonging in the cuckold category of stories. |
| 2012-12-26 15:11:06 |
I Dream of Jeannie
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Nicely done. Stayed in character; it brought the original to mind, only better. |