| 2009-03-08 21:37:14 |
Serious Mistake Going Sailing
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Excellant story. Will there be a follow up with the new master? |
| 2009-03-10 19:22:20 |
Love Honor and Obey - REVISED
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Lucky woman to have found her true master...and lucky you to have your true slave... |
| 2009-03-11 19:29:23 |
Fae sex
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Not a bad storyline, but you really need to stay in one tense when you write instead of switching back and forth between past tense and present tense |
| 2009-03-11 20:52:02 |
wolves in the forrest part 1
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excellent writing...you have a definite talent for catching and holding the reader's attention. Catch the stuff like staying in first person, and spelling during the proofread, and you will be perfect... |
| 2009-03-15 18:04:50 |
School of Hard Cocks
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Good story, perfect training...and to the reader below...just because it isnt to your taste doesnt make being either a master or slave shit...my master makes me feel things and takes me to heights of pleasure that no non-dominant man can ever bring forth with their tepid "lovemaking" |