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Comments from chip84
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-03-15 12:31:56 | Kyles Revenge | right lets start. Grammar is not perfect. There was no Enema no Death no Cock and Ball torture and no Snuff. I also found it Racust. As far as criticism goes. Proof read your storie before posting and please describe your storie as accurately as you can |
| 2009-05-27 14:42:08 | A teenage lus | That story is great! Well done, especially for your first story. Sure there is couple of grammar mistakes, but for me the story was just the right length and got me hard. |
| 2009-05-27 14:44:43 | A teenage lus | i would also just like to add to my previous comment, it is really annoying when people give a negative rating and dont explain why, and it offends me as an author on this site, that you write a story and it can take some time, and the people who give negative feedback wont even spare a couple of moments to give a comment. chip84 |
| 2019-10-20 14:37:59 | Bathroom Assault | Good short story. Thanks. |