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Comments from 6699
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-08-18 22:45:28 | The Stranger_(0) | Great story. But one sentance paragraphs are very difficult to follow--can you re-format future tales for longer paragraphs? |
| 2013-08-18 23:05:12 | When Toni Cums | Great story for a 'newby'. So HOT! Can't wait for part 2. Two suggestions: leave another space between paragraphs to make it easier to read; and 'your' is possesive for something that is yours while 'you're' is a conjunction of 'you are'. In the story "your mine" needs to be "You're mine." Check my story "The Back Deck" under 6699 for another cop father's exploits. |