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Comments from del fuego
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-09-06 23:46:26 | The First Night in the Cabin | LOVED THE INTRO. You called it. ROFLOL |
| 2009-09-06 23:52:52 | bonding with daddy | VINCE, DRASTIC IMPROVEMENT IN YOUR WRITING. Very good and erotic. keep up the good work. Hot !!! |
| 2009-09-07 00:02:02 | me and jess | Excellent for a first try. 7/10 keep going, develop the characters as people and their feelings for each other. Just because its incest doesn't mean it should short circuit the normal man/woman love and desire. Flesh out the story, add detail, eagerly waiting for chapter 2 POSITIVE |