| 2009-05-28 19:58:46 |
-10th Grade- The Rock Climb (2)
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I agree.. You could make an alternate version where they have much more sex where instead of Nick dying, him and the dog could have a fight sort of but the dog falls over the cliff instead of him :] but what else can I say.. Writers choice I guess xD. Well written. |
| 2009-05-28 20:08:04 |
Daddy_(0)
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Loved both of the 'Daddy' stories.. Wanting more but not really sure what to expect next xD very nicely written. |
| 2009-05-29 23:42:27 |
First Kiss Goes Too Far - Part II
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Just a suggestion but it would be cool if you could possible bring Mark back into the story :] |