| 2011-04-18 23:48:29 |
Me and My Cousin_(8)
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really good story i love it. -- Jon |
| 2011-04-25 21:46:51 |
Me and My Cousin_(8)
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you should use some good names like...Ashton & Tyler.... Tyler as the narator and Ashton as the cousin. then mention or like bring in a friend called Jon D. i like those names. i think it would work out really good. you say its a true story... ask the other boy (Ashton) what he thinks about this comment... |
| 2011-06-05 15:42:21 |
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really people whats up with all this crap about foreigners jeez keep it clean please has nothing to do about the story... |
| 2011-09-19 18:36:19 |
Sebbys Way with Me Chapter One
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one of the best stories on here. loved the feeling Elijah had for Sebby. its rare for that feeling on this site. everyone always rushes things. :) |
| 2011-09-19 18:36:51 |
Sebbys Way with Me Chapter Two
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one of the best stories on here. loved the feeling Elijah had for Sebby. its rare for that feeling on this site. everyone always rushes things. :) |