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Comments from JS-Hellman
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-11-26 05:50:45 | Death Throes | I'd say you got jilted pal. I've seen alot worse rated alot better on this site. True it was'nt "wack off"material, true it was nerdy as hell(no punn intended), but I'm a sucker for a well written story. At least it's different from all the incest/step-sibling crap on here. |
| 2010-03-26 04:45:04 | Just one girl..... | not bad for a first story, so short though. Dont be afraid to draw out the excitement, build the characters more, or have multiple sexual encounters in each story. one other thing, add an empty line between each paragraph, makes it alot easier to read. |
| 2010-08-11 04:21:13 | The Kindergarden Blues | Great start, but you totally skimped on the action. dont just tell us that they had alot of great sex, actually describe it! |
| 2010-09-25 05:58:55 | Beths Incestation | A Negative vote for your bullshit joke..... js-hellman posts much better and much more funny jokes. people go checkout his jokes you will laugh like hell. ...douchebag |
| 2010-09-25 05:59:36 | Family Only Part 3. Beth's pre night incestation. | A Negative vote for your bullshit joke..... js-hellman posts much better and much more funny jokes. people go checkout his jokes you will laugh like hell. ...douchebag |