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Comments from smoothtalker
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-07-31 01:25:32 | A summer with my Stepsister Mary, Part 1 | Very good, keep writing. smoothtalker |
| 2009-07-31 01:32:46 | My birthday surprise part one. | Remember what genre this is in. Dont give her shit for writing a story like this, just dont read it. People like this or they don't. If you don't, be disgusted elsewhere and don't post you or would just be annoying on purpose, and that would make you an ass. Good story keep writing. And as for the grammar and spelling so what you can obviously understand what she is trying to write. Keep on writing, waiting for number 2. |
| 2009-08-05 17:42:30 | My Neighbor's Incest Part IX | Extremely good as always. keep on writing. |
| 2009-08-09 17:39:22 | Finding a Treasure at Winn-Dixie 2 | Very good. I hope that you survive your trip to the hospital so you can write part 3, haha I am being selfish. Awesome story man keep on. |
| 2009-08-12 04:22:01 | My daughter Miriam ch02 (updated) | its ok, the story would be better if it was more believable. As for format and grammar it doesn't matter, as long as the story gets across. |