| 2011-05-02 04:25:35 |
Boy Stud-1
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Not bad. I want to read more though. |
| 2011-05-11 03:07:37 |
Me and my Twin Sister_(0)
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I liked it better when it was first written by nivek_88. He did it much better. You are a fucking loser. |
| 2011-05-18 04:29:13 |
An incest birthday chapter 15
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Finished!! Lol. That was a lot to read but worth it. So I got to fuck the mom and aunt when they were in France. Yay me! Thanks for the shout-out. ^_^ I see you went with my idea about the handcuffs. Very kinky. I loved seeing Rita fuck Stephanie like a bitch. Slapping her arse and making her beg for it, was so fucking hot! I love doing that to my girl. I don't see it as an obsession on Rita. She's in love. I get the same way sometimes. But I still want to see Rita fuck Chris and Randy fuck Stephanie. Maybe have them get way too drunk. One problem is something you even said you were goint to fix but didn't. They still haven't gone back to school. I loved this chapter so much. Next have an orgy for the guys. And no women. :P |
| 2011-06-20 03:59:55 |
Corontation Street - An Ensemble Fuck Story
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Not bad. Some of the way they talked threw me off. I am not too familiar with english vernacular. But all in all it's good. |
| 2011-06-25 04:16:15 |
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This is a great series, druid. Hope you write more. Nice twist at the end. ^_^ |