| 2009-12-08 01:46:49 |
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Part 3 is coming out. I just submitted it. Sorry it took me so long, I have just been very busy. I hope you all like the next part. I tried to add a little more detail, but I could have probably used more... |
| 2009-12-09 00:57:36 |
boy's first cock
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It was a hot story, but not enough detail for my likings. If you take your time a little more, then it is a very good story. |
| 2010-04-16 21:36:40 |
Sailing in Thailand
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To my opinion, this story is grossly underrated. It is not a sex filled story, but it has that sense of realism that I love. Great story, and I really wish that you continue to write! |
| 2011-03-04 09:02:55 |
Max and Trent in Love
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Very hot! I love when you call him your slut and such. Good story! |
| 2013-01-02 15:05:31 |
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Hey everyone! I wanted to thank everyone for the comments and suggestions. I also wanted to let everyone know that posting this story was a mistake. I did not intend on posting this for a little while, but a laptop malfunction accidentally posted this early. The way I write is by starting off with a "free write" session, which is just writing without fixing, and that is what you see here. So I am sorry for the mistakes and everything that may not be right. I have asked for this one to be deleted, and then the better one will be posted soon after that! Continue to comment and suggest things though! Thank you everyone and enjoy! |