| 2010-08-10 07:47:51 |
Sharing My Room With Sis: Sharing My Computer
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beautiful story. i love incest stories and this one is very hot! got me hard as a rock! |
| 2010-08-11 08:06:43 |
Jessica, My Next-Door Neighbor
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That was a beautiful story! I love reading about young sex like this. I love bare feet so how about some foot action? Have Steven lick Jessica's bare feet. A little anal action would be nice to see as well. I think Steven would really enjoy a hand job while Jessica stands behind him with her arms wrapped around his body and it's outdoors. Can't wait to see your next chapter! |
| 2010-08-11 08:15:57 |
The Tennis Partners
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Nice story! Yes, do bring another girl into the story and have a threesome! Make the other girl even younger. Can't wait for the next chapter. Good job for your first story! |
| 2010-08-13 08:28:25 |
Breaking In And Getting Caught
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even though i don't like the thought of a gun, i loved the family sex. very hot! |
| 2010-08-13 08:36:33 |
What Daddy Needs
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very erotic story. somewhat sad and a nice touch of realism with the irag and afghanistan references. you didn't say if this was a true story or not, but it makes me wonder if it is. you are a good writer. |