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Comments from SpaceMountain
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-11-02 16:14:27 | Babysitting Keith (3) | And, when it says "looked down" it doesn't mean she's on top. It means she looked down her body. Kissing a stomach isn't hard. It doesn't have to be at the belly button. Pretty much anywhere below the chest. |
| 2009-11-02 16:49:56 | Summer Breeze. | Um, you can't speak for all guys. Anyhow, it kind of makes sense to describe what you're wearing so the reader can picture it. I'm sure you've done it in the stories you've written. "could be expected from a 17 yr-old." Elaborate on that. |
| 2009-11-02 17:58:54 | Carlie and Me. | No one said anything about joining the armed forces... I wish people would think before they typed. Or at least read the other comments and see that it's already been addressed. Oh, what a perfect world it'd be... |
| 2009-11-03 12:16:26 | Carlie and Me. | Once again...and for the final time... The only reason I mentioned football was so the reader would understand what time of year it was. That's it. Carlie is a very small girl. I couldn't make him much bigger or they wouldn't have blended well. One person said something about his size and then everyone thought they needed to throw their two cents in. Bottom line: I don't care. It is what it is. If it's such a problem, move on. |
| 2009-11-11 17:39:10 | Carlie and Me. | I don't need any tips from you. If you ever bothered to look around before sounding like an idiot, you'd realize that this is my one and only story featuring a blonde character. If you don't like it, don't read it. I could care less what you think. To sum this up... Go fuck yourself. |