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Comments from lexin
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2009-11-25 23:15:40 | My 8th Grade Math Teacher (Part 1) | First effort? Excellent. Okay there were some grammar errors but that all comes with experience. Do NOT let the comments deter you. You have a great imagination and the construction of the story was not bad at all. ( Maybe in future do as I try to do and have a friend "proof read' your storys before submitting. No matter how many times you re-read your own work, another can see a flaw before you ) I can will only give you encouragement to continue writing and please do not be disappointed with the other remarks, there is talent within you. ~smiles~ |