| 2013-11-25 22:54:27 |
My wife and the delivery boy
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Pretty good ideas and you will probably get better with practice. Use spell check. Put caps where they belong and separate paragraphs. Don't give up. |
| 2013-11-28 22:52:10 |
Beloved Aunt Ch.2
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Numerous small problems in both parts that would be fixed by proof reading a couple more time but over all it is an enjoyable story and I think you should keep it going. Tell us more about the secret room and what they had been doing and have Mom get in on the fun. |
| 2013-11-30 16:54:51 |
Space cow slut
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Not a bad rough story idea. In her cunt and out her mouth. Those parts do not connect and that would kill her. You need to be more realistic than that if you want to try another story. It has to be a negative. Sorry |
| 2014-01-16 23:07:08 |
Giving myself to my husband's boss and his wife. Part 3
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It looks like there can be a part 4 and I will look forward to it. |
| 2013-12-20 17:01:52 |
My first fuck was a huge black cock.
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I really like the way you told about her fuck with Bill. |