| 2016-01-21 14:03:31 |
Fine line part 1
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When are you going too finish, this is bad because you should have put a little more in this. 6/10 |
| 2016-01-21 14:46:00 |
Uncharted Territory
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THIS LOOKS TO BE SOME GOOD READING!!!!! 9/10 |
| 2016-01-22 13:36:47 |
Ethan's Ski Trip With Russ Pt. 1: Warm-Up Taboo Before The Trip._(1)
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Even in your after thoughts had typo errors. You need to reread your story at least two times. Other than it was a little hard to read sometimes it was very good. 7/10 |
| 2016-01-22 14:19:45 |
Ed & Holly: Big Brother's Comfort._(7)
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The more I read the better they get. 8/10 |
| 2016-01-22 13:59:35 |
Poolside Taboo._(1)
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Good story keep it going.. 7/10 |