| 2017-06-08 21:59:57 |
Caught With Sister's Best Friends Dirty Panties
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Need to use quotation marks. Makes it easier to read. |
| 2017-06-08 18:43:33 |
Mommy Mind Control Chapter 2: Mommy's Naughty Threesome
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Pretty good story. Slight inconsistancies though. Chapter 1 has the the boys as 14 and 16 years old. Chapter 2 has them as 18 then 19 and the other at 20 years old. |
| 2021-02-03 13:32:55 |
Siblings Desire
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Good story but you keep changing from past and present tense. Even in the same sentence. Made it a bit difficult to read. |
| 2021-02-03 13:33:46 |
Siblings Desire
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Good story but you keep changing from past and present tense. Even in the same sentence. Made it a bit difficult to read. |