| 2011-07-19 15:01:24 |
Uncle Andy cones to visit
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The part where she sucks her uncle's cock and he fucks her raw is missing. He should get the big-titted girl drunk and abuse her when she's fucked up, or she should walk into the shower and catch her uncle masturbating and then suck his dick. Lots of tension in this story, but little release. |
| 2011-07-19 16:25:23 |
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Good story. I like 11 yo girls to suck me off while I'm watching porn. Like tying them up and fucking them until they cry for mommy too. Good work on this scene. Jenny needs to suck off her brother next. |
| 2011-07-20 14:35:24 |
My first time with daddy_(2)
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Break up the text with paragraphs and line breaks. I like what your dad did to you and how he tricked you into sucking and fucking with him. He probably did a lot more stuff with you after this. You got some good action for a short story, but need to work on formatting to make it easier to read. |
| 2011-10-26 15:59:08 |
Daddy luvin
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Wow, really fine story. You are a very good writer. I like the part where you're licking his cock the best. Write more and post them here and I'll read every one. You got me really hard reading this one. Thanks. |
| 2011-10-26 16:00:13 |
Daddy luvin
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Wow, really fine story. You are a very good writer. I like the part where you're licking his cock the best. Write more and post them here and I'll read every one. You got me really hard reading this one. Thanks. |