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Date Story title Comment
2010-07-22 21:14:39 Wish upon a star ch.1 Very good. I would love to read more and find out how the rest of the week went.
2010-08-20 20:52:20 Jenna’s Story I absolutely love this story. I know somebody will flame me for saying this. Oh well. In reality, I would never do anything to hurt a child, physically or emotionally. However, this is fiction and fantasy and as such it is super hot. I think girls around that age are sexy as hell. The tiny budding breasts, the bald, silky smooth crotch. I just wish you would continue this story. Have her give her virginity to dad, gently and lovingly.
2010-09-24 09:58:06 Summer au Naturel Great story. Would love for you to continue it. Maybe a little swapping with mom and dad.

And as for the comment about grammar, I think you did great. It's nice not to have to stop and reread something because the grammar is so bad it's hard to understand. Just because they like to have sex doesn't mean they are uneducated yokels. lol
2010-09-27 20:06:46 Playing After School Great story. Loved the ages. You hinted at how pretty the mother was. Too bad she didn't catch them and then join in.

A younger sister, maybe a year younger than the twins to join them a while after they got started.

Also, a snafu with the spermicide and an accidental pregnancy would have been hot.

Like some have mentioned, I was kind of expecting anal, but not being a big fan, I'm glad you didn't go there.
2010-09-28 17:45:04 Oh god, I love the moral dilemma element. That makes it soooooo hot.
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