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Comments from Twistedsister
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2013-07-01 14:31:37 | Changed 01 - Sentenced | It was pretty good, i enjoyed it. Yes there were a few semicolons in wrong places but I could read it. PS - to the sooky sooky lah lahs, whinging about punctuations...this ain't no literature contest, so grow up. Don't worry about them, they are probably the same losers that whinge about my grammar. As far as I am concern, they can go to a hardware store and buy some wood and build a fckn bridge and get over themselves. |
| 2013-07-11 11:35:09 | CHANGED 02 - Prey | Not bad, told like it was experienced before |
| 2014-03-29 03:27:24 | JESINTA 7A - School Holidays | thanks for your encouragment :) |
| 2021-07-11 03:29:25 | My Transition - Chapter 02 – The Break Up | Looked like a lot was going on and summarised. |
| 2021-06-05 22:47:17 | My Transition - Chapter 01 - New Beginning | I love the in-depth transition line, even though it's no scholarly story, we/I get it. |